Can someone tell me.. Hi guys never listed a car on tm before so was just wondering if all looks and sounds good check my listin

draco27, Feb 18, 6:50pm
hi guys, never listed a car on tm before so was just wondering if all looks and sounds good! check my listings to c it, thanks
vtecintegra, Feb 18, 6:56pm
Check your spelling - heaps of mistakes and that really isn't a good look

Also that picture of the console area looks disgusting - give the car a decent clean inside.
andy61, Feb 18, 7:03pm
Agree with vtec,improve the spelling-been not bin,tyres not tryeschassis,which, early,shown. Why mention how much it costs to fill tank! etc etc
draco27, Feb 18, 7:14pm
we cleaned the car yesterday, took the whole day to do so. my partner put this up not me, he was in a hurry
draco27, Feb 18, 7:19pm
and why not have the price for gas!
saxman99, Feb 18, 7:33pm
Maybe tidy up that sub wiring !
jason18, Feb 18, 7:41pm
Feel not fell. I would give it a way better clean.invest in some silicon spray for tyres and mud guards. clean up the ass end and give the car another good clean. Get the vacuum in there and clean up wiring etc. Better pics
kazbanz, Feb 18, 7:56pm
draco--Look you are trying to sell something of value. SO you need to put in some effort
The advert doesn't sell the car to me in any way I'm sorry
Whats great about the car!
Also some of the pics really are a turn off. All that sub wiring suggests a really nasty install.
The splash of white paint on the area of damage on the back suggests rust hastilly covered up.
-Id tidy the wires,wipe that white paint off with thinnners and clean up whats under it--if you must then brush some dark paint into the damaged area ONLY
illusion_, Feb 18, 9:05pm
cos what it costs to fill the tank is completely irrelevant. What kms it does per llitre on the other hand MAY be relevant (personally I wouldnt bother with either)
paull, Feb 18, 9:20pm
crap add i would flick to the next honda if i was looking, i allways start with the positives, as-in the wof/reg,tyres,stereo, any thing that will add some sort of value to the car, how about reg services or cam belts bin done if it has one, i never put down the faults but i will show pictures of them and then people can ask or come have a look. popular little cars so should have no trouble selling it. sometimes i start with a low asking price and this can get people interested as they will add it to there watchlist and they will keep checking it , the pictures are shite and for the asking price i would expect a better looking car.it really just looks like a $1000 car to me.
rlr29, Feb 18, 9:22pm
It's about 2grand overpriced.
bellky, Feb 18, 9:36pm
spelling looks ok now. if you want top dollar, like someone else said, clean it up a bit more (i'm thinking vacuum around the gear stick in the centre console).
looks like there's something hanging down underneath the car on drivers side.
lugee, Feb 18, 9:40pm
Clean the car, especially the centre console. Tidy that audio equipment in the boot. Thats a real put off.
mugenb20b, Feb 18, 9:49pm
Yeah right! Tui! I wish I could make up a story on the MB as an excuse to self promote.
drew2009, Feb 18, 9:57pm
Change the price to $1000, or list it at $1 res.
$2300 is crazy for a car that rough.
Also the text could be better written, check out some of the dealer auctions if you need ideas.
pettal, Feb 18, 10:16pm
" Have been listed else where so can be withdrawn any time "= anotherturn off for anybody thinking of bidding .